WHJAKL
Communications
Contact: Wanda Cardona FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE
Telephone: (845) 575-3000 Friday, April 29, 2016
Email: wanda.cardona1@marist.edu
TEAM 503 Digital Portfolio for Marist
College Online Graduate Program
Why
Marist College?
POUGHKEEPSIE, N.Y. – Team 503 will be
launching its new blog on Friday, May 6, 2016. Team 503 will convey, communicate and
support the importance and necessity of Marist College’s online graduate
program. Team 503 will implement ideas
to Marist College strategic plan by monitoring trends in the online graduate student
market, survey the online graduate student’s population, enhance the student
support services for online graduate students and develop community-based
learning experiences for online graduate students.
Team
503 consists of six online graduate students from all walks of life with one
goal in common: to obtain a master's degree in communications. Marist College impeccable reputation have
provided both, incoming and outgoing online graduate students with the tool
necessary to succeed during and after completing the masters program. According
to the testimonial of Divine, an alumnus at Marist College “I chose Marist
College because I wanted to be a part of a college where my voice can be heard,
I could call home, I could share my culture and experience with people who
would be interested in listening and learning from me”. Our goal is to keep online
graduate students happy and help Marist College stay successful!
Who: Wanda Cardona, Helen Gschneidner, Janice Webber, Amanda
Howard, Kristen Castoro and Lorrie Bolt a/k/a WHJAKL Communications
What: A press conference to implement ideas to Marist College and
its faculties regarding benefits for prospective online graduate students and
present online graduate students.
When: 12:00 p.m. ET (noon) on Friday, May 6,
2016
Where: Marist College (Lowell Thomas
Communications Center)
3399 North Road, Poughkeepsie NY
Why: To maintain Marist College' respectable reputation as well
as improve its online graduate program.
How: Each member of Team 503 will share their experience as an
online graduate student to Marist College and its faculties, as well as share
beneficial ideas on ways to improve its program.
The 21st century have become a fast-pace phenomenon
and it is important that we go beyond the formalities in order to become
successful in our career of choice. Marist
College is the right choice!
We are very excited about the launching
of our new blog and cannot wait to share our ideas with Marist College, its
faculties and prospective online graduate students!
If you would like
more information about WHJAKL Communications, log onto http://503marist.blogspot.com/.
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Wanda, you can improve your press release by taking the following actions:
ReplyDelete- Use the appropriate dateline.
- When using a quote, name the person who delivered the quote.
- Correct punctuation errors.
- Do not use hyperlinks in a traditional press release.
- Double space each line and indent paragraphs.
- Use proper AP style for academic degree titles.
- Use parallelism in sentences that contain a series of phrases.
- Use proper possessives for singular and plural nouns.
- Correct errors in noun-pronoun (singular, plural) agreement.
- Correct spacing after end punctuation marks.
- Address all elements of a press release: who, what, when, where, why, how.
- Align and use proper bold, italic and regular design elements for headings.
Also try inserting an image of the actual press release, with a link that opens the original document, rather than pasting text into the blog window.
P.S. Be consistent with use of fonts. The font in paragraph one is different from the font in the rest of the release.
DeleteLooks great Wanda!
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